when the dancing stops

Theme

when the dancing stops

the light in your deep room dims

can’t pedal enough

***

Variation

when the dancing stops

your deep room dims, shrinking

you

can’t ignite the light

///

when the dancing stops

you, not treading hard enough

no anchor buoy sinking

\\\

when the dancing stops

the cold chasm is too wide

vast thirst undrinking

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when the dancing

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9 Responses to when the dancing stops

  1. t h i n g s + f l e s h says:

    Chloe, so incandescent and brimming with truth. x tony

  2. chiaink says:

    The grief is very intense. I hope you are not feeling that right now. Hugs, Chia

    • SirenaTales says:

      Dear Chia, I so appreciate your warmth and big heart. Hugs most welcome, and reciprocated. Hope this piece didn’t bring you down–I hesitated posting it, but decided to go with it, especially after recalling discussions with fellow dancers about how we feel when we are nit dancing….Things better today. Have a lovely weekend, my faraway friend. Xo

  3. Sending you rays of light and uplifting energy, ST xoxo

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