haven haiku

security once

scuttled breeds subtle unease

the questions niggle

~~

I search for solace

your love’s soft blanket swaddles

these interiors

~~

you are my haven

as warm cups of tea soothing

memory cuddled

~~

you breathe love through me

enveloping serenely

spark the possible

loving me open

for X

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15 Responses to haven haiku

  1. chiaink says:

    You write beautiful haiku Chloe 🙂

  2. Uzoma says:

    Lovely haiku, Chloe! This will stay with me: “Your love’s soft blanket swaddles these interiors.” Where there is love, life takes a whole new meaning. I like to think it’s a haven where all can go to.

    Keep these haikus coming. You’re a great poetess and words have a way of aligning themselves around you.

    • SirenaTales says:

      Well, your wonderful and generous image of “words aligning themselves around” me had me skipping out the door this morning for a long day of driving and dancing. No extra fuel needed! Thank you for your specific feedback and lovely, poetic insights, Uzo. You are a treasure….

  3. Miranda Stone says:

    This is just fantastic, Chloe! I love the beautiful imagery and also the alliteration you use. Your words truly do invoke the image of a safe haven, a comfortable intimacy that fights back the unease. Love and hugs to you, my friend!

    • SirenaTales says:

      “a comfortable intimacy that fights back the unease”–yes, yes! I am so pleased to hear that you felt what I was attempting to convey, Miranda. Your presence here is such a gift! Love to you

  4. Eileen says:

    you breathe love through me…………………loving me open

    What a perfect description of the power of love! Wonderful, whether applied to a relationship with a friend/ lover/spouse or God. Triggered a strong desire in me to capture in similar simplicity
    that magic in tangible moments.

  5. willowmarie says:

    This is so tender, almost haunting. I’m so happy you’ve known this feeling.

  6. Geo Sans says:

    Reblogged this on Geo Sans and commented:
    a poetic confidant … NaPoWriMo

  7. you are such a lover of words Chloe,
    a wonderful string of Haiku.

  8. Pingback: My Poetic Confidants / My April Reblogs | Geo Sans

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