a snap

in the line

the old, familiar lure

weighted, plummeting

a fish, thrashes

I disentangling

cannot come with you this time

a crack

splits the air

between us

(a muffle)

as the light floods in

redemption, releasing

our ancient chains



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5 Responses to Disentangling

  1. Rachael says:

    This is stunning, Chloe. Releasing our ancient chains… the Rebirth xx

  2. diahannreyes says:

    “a snap in the line” – this is the PERFECT way to describe what it’s like for me when a pattern that has been playing my nervous system like a broken record finally comes off the player. It’s the best aha moment – it’s own victory, really. Redemption, indeed.

    • SirenaTales says:

      Oh, I love that image of the broken record…and its snapping! As always, I am so grateful for the inspiration you share through your insight and experiences, Diahann. Speaking of that, I have been wondering how your book is going, and have been sending much positive juju your way.

      • diahannreyes says:

        Thank you for your constant support Chloe. I am prepping to enter the beta reader phase and do a proposal- both time consuming ventures but very exciting!

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